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Title: Fisherman's Wife



She stands on the rocks and watches the boat in the distance. She thinks she can see them standing together on the deck.

The waves crash and spray her with salt water.

She stands alone and holds her hands together. She thinks she sees them close, so close. Like they are dancing on the small deck. Like they might be holding each other.

They could be kissing each other for all she knows. Far out there in the sea. Her husband's strong arms and two mouths crashing against each other when they think no one sees them.

They're probably just fishing. People need to stand close... It's a small boat.

She stands there all morning, goes home, and returns in the afternoon. The boat turns its nose back to shore when the sky's turning pink in the horizon. It's getting cold. She stares to sea for hours, almost every day.

Light on her feet she runs to the dock and greets them, a smile on her face to hide her suspicions, to hide her mistrust.

"Hello David," she says and kisses her husband's cheek. "Hey Tom," she adds with a friendly wave of her hand. Tomorrow they'll go out to sea again. Tomorrow, again, she'll stand there and watch as they stand too close.


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Date: 2007-07-31 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydraco.livejournal.com
Good descriptions and good characters (for what we see of them).

Date: 2007-07-31 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklebutch.livejournal.com
There's probably a whole Hallmark-type movie hidden in there ;)


Thank you :)

Date: 2007-07-31 05:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com
Beautifully written, but, damn, the woman has ISSUES.

Date: 2007-07-31 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklebutch.livejournal.com
Either she has issues, or she has a point... Gotta wonder.

Thank you :)

Date: 2007-08-02 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mallyns.livejournal.com
I agree with keerawa, beautifully written. Though, I do wonder what is going on in the boat, will we find out?

Date: 2007-08-02 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklebutch.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

You can use your imagination... or, if that's too slashy, you can use some mainstreamer's imagination ;)

Date: 2007-08-02 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mallyns.livejournal.com
My imagination is never too slashy. I like the pretty boys who have hot sex with other pretty boys.

Date: 2007-08-02 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklebutch.livejournal.com
Me too.
Gen friendship is just a change from the usual course of things, isn't it :)

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