:-) I have a friend who's agreed to look at it when I've edited, as there's an aspect I want to get right and she's the closest I know to an authority. I think I may watch a cheesy movie and then come back to it tonight, I kind of want to edit it now, but I don't think I've had enough of a break from it yet to do so successfully.

Also, I realised it's my 99th fic - *that's* scary.